Video Game Music
very primitive, brings me back to a simple time. But you were WAY off when you decided this was "Heavy Metal". Also, its extremely short, and definitely unfinished. If this was worked on, it could be an excellent video game track, I do see potential. But you get a 3/10 for your epic error in communication. Metal? Not in my word buddy.
i just put it as metal cuz i didnt know what it was, it wont happen again, and i am planning on editing the track, thanks for the comeback
Great...
I'm writing this here so you can get higher mark on this submission lol. I love the amount of initiative and dedication you are putting towards this collab, but this is a little too long. If it was approx. 2.5 mins, and with less major key stuff, it would be the absolute perfect song I'm looking for. Also, I have no instruments available where I am, so I might as well ask you, what key is it in? I'm looking for either C, C#, or D minor, depending on what the piano players prefer to play to. But this is excellent, cheers from Canada.
Excellent. I'm open to any key. Just ask them which they prefer, and one of the reasons it's so long is so that you can pick or choose which part you like best.
NIICE
But I think it needs some deep, low metal vocals over yours. I tried it briefly, and it sounds epic. Harmony should always be considered
Lots of harmonies going on here. I did try the deep gutterals and it was too much brutality for this more melodic song. In my opinion. But that is just my opinion. I had to make it fit the rest of the "album"
. I like your idea, and if you are a singer/growler, maybe we should hit up some form of collab sometime?
Anyways, thanks for the review and listen, dude!!
NIICE
Possibly the best metal in 3/4 ive heard. Transitions are perfect, and the synth matches the song great. Could I send you some lyrics for this? I do metal vocals and lead guitar, and would like to colaberate with you on this (even though it's pretty well finished).
Yes Please do some vox dude, I'll lay em into the final mix
one question
was the pick slide from Punk o Matic? because if it is, this is a win for sure
Lol, yes it is. Our guitars didn't have the right tune. BTW we had permission to use it. TY so much for the the score!
wish it could have lasted hours longer
I am sorry... but there is nothing, nothing you can do to make this better. It is pure and beautiful. Now, the only way to top yourself is to divide by zero, so get to work.
Heh, thank you! Think I'll stick to music, seems comparatively safe.
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Perfect build up, might be a little long, but still a great way to start a masterpiece. The tone was a little off, and the ending was very abrupt, like it was just a loop stopped and left for dead. The drums sound too triggered, especially the bass drum, which gets annoying after a while. The symbols have a little hiss, especially the bell, but it's tolerable. The snare sounds bad too, but alas, still a great song. With some decent vocals this would be amazing. add vocals and harmonize the solo, and it'll be 11/10
Thanks for the very constructive review :) ! I know, my tone is kind of fishy, but I'm working on it ! I also noticed I forgot to mention that the song was incomplete :s ! It of course doesn't stop just like that ^^ !
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it !
beautiful and inspiring
I hope to one day write and record music like this. Thank you for sharing it with the world
You're welcome! :D
3oh!3? There is talent and structure in this song!
BTW 9/10 for dissing your own guitar player man. Physio flip him off lol
Thanks man. I am glad you appreciated that.
We all pick on each other (not to mention I was a tad bit tipsy).
What is the fun of being serious. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
In all seriousness, I am glad you don't think we sound like 30h!3.
Plus, once we get a couple of our other songs done, it will show just how diverse we be.
EYA MAN!
sounds like an average day at my house
you and me both bro
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